Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jun 22, 2011
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing Forms workshop

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Under The Cover Of Darkness 

Under the cover of darkness
Secrets are made
hidden like treasures
in the heart of earth's core

Secrets are like diamonds
dirty, tainted with impurities of life

Secrets like ocean jewels
when purged of it's sins
makes the heart shines
like pearls on the necks of stars

Secrets made and shared
under the cover of darkness
when revealed at dawn
draws the light of truth
on mountaintops

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I wrote this on my iPhone notepad then copied and paste so the format is a little off

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

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Comments

loved

loved

13 years 10 months ago

under the cover of darkness
newly marrieds
did u or could u read it
please.

Barbara Writes

Thanks for the two suggestions I will make some edits

Geezer

Geezer

13 years 10 months ago

with Ian, you should drop a few of the secrets, and I'm not sure about the line with diamonds. I thought diamonds were supposed to be a symbol of purity, and clear. ~ Gee