brittle light
brittle light
May 12, 2011

Two, Six syllable Lines

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opinion speaks loudly
wisdom bites off its tongue

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

judyanne

what do you want al?
blood everywhere clogging up all our keyboards?

seriously
a clever write
love judy

brittle light

thanks...minimalism, or more correctly, very short pieces can be fun...if they work as conceived

glad to see you back on campus

S

Ori A it i onge fff. Translation: Sorry, I bit my tongue off lmao..........stan