This poem
called on me
today.
Only two words
came
to ask if I would
like to
play,
Let
Love...
Yes, just
Let
and
Love...
Your heart
can write the rest.
I'm too busy
dancing.
Oct 17, 2013
Two Little Words
About This Poem
Last Few Words: so long since I visited here... too busy dancing :) love to all xxx
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Beki
Lovely to see you again back to two Moonrakers now again.
But only two little words from you, "Let Love" mind you they are lovely words and can be added to many things.
Great to have you return we have missed you,
Yours Ian.T
Beki,
I like the simplicity of this and how you structure it, it carries the reader to the end in a smooth embraced dance.
Very, very good write.
Two little words, that are so huge!
Eddie
So nice ...
to see you again! And such a great poetic-thought! Nothing more is needed. ~ Gee
Don't dance,
Don't dance to long, as i'll miss your words so wise. Love Roscoe...