Hook line and sinker
Now a twittering stinker uses my clothes
That opinionated SOB even looks like me
Tee hee hee
He's free to cuss and fume and howl at the moon
And, brevity is a must
Trimmin' hashtags flags verbosity and
even 1 more symbol is not tolerated
The thimble only hold this much
tough to do unless I remember I can fill page 2 too
if I damn well please
Sieze the day away and talk to them!, twidiot
Jul 22, 2020
Twidiot
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Quick ditty to jump back in. Playing on the word plane plain silliness.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hi Miserably Happy,
Hi Miserably Happy, interesting topic. It reads more like prose than poetry, but my guess is that is what you want. Not sure what you mean and to whom you're referring. Perhaps you could give me an idea.
Powerful piece, nonetheless. Best, Gracy (I prefer to call you Happy!)