a barren tundra
far far away from it all
there is nothing here
Sep 11, 2011
Tundra
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Haiku
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
nice one
evokes with perfect subtlety a desolation of mind and experience, not just place.
Thank you,
In ink,
David