True Marriage

Every heartbeat counts
Our love grows deeper each hour
Enduring and true

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great haiku, by Clentin! ~ Geez.
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when it is about people, it is called a senryu, I think.

and this is a good one!

*hugs and love, Cat

Thank you, also for reminding me of the poem form, senyru.

are right it is senryu. Good catch...~ Geez.
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Thanks, I always seem to follow up with a shorter poem

Haiku may be your specialty! Well done!

Thank you Rose i appreciate your reading my poems and for suggestions