TRAVEL IS MUST

You are a very
intelligent teen
I had once been

travel makes us wild
and wisdom wise wide
you have that acumen

inculcated may be
to me it came naturally
so I ask all who read me

come
and
Abide With Me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Travel Is Must

Hi, Lovedly,
In most of your poems, I usually find a few words that could stand alone - a poem in and of themselves. "I ask all who read me, come and abide with me." I think that's exactly what most poets want and need.
Thank you,
L

Hi

I'm not quite sure of what you mean Can you elaborate what is lacking in my poems pl Thanks

Stand Alone Words

Hello, Lovedly
So sorry I wasn't clear. I meant that sometimes there are a few words within a poem that are so profound, they strike me as a poem by themselves. I didn't mean that the rest of the poem is lacking, just that "I ask all who read me, come and abide with me" really stood out and touched me.
Thank you!
L

you two hold my hand

thanks