lovedly
lovedly
Jul 01, 2015

trance dance in France

when I compose
I go into a trance

as if I'm in Paris
in France

or going around in romance
yes prance

as I poetically dance

obscure to the world around
I am to be spectacularly found

NOT to any law bound!
poetry is emotional display
we play
our own way

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

alidzain

a little play with some rhyme I see.

I wish I could rhyme well,
but most of the time its's hell
to keep it going for me
that's why I envy you, see?

When I compose
I hope its not prose
Hate to irritate Mr Wes
want to give my best

I fly into wonderland
where elves wander hand in hand
and fairies danced in the night
their motion filled with delight

I plunged into darkness
to see its many faces
and form a balance in my write
of shadows and glory light

Now this little poem I offer
doesn't make me a rhyme master
just a practing student
learning from you for self-betterment.

Alid

lovedly

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ouchhhhhhhhhhhh
like laying on the couch
enjoying music

lovely alidz