lovedly
lovedly
Nov 13, 2014

time travel eh!

TIME TRAVEL
They, meaning
WE humans, collectively
Finally reached the comet
a decade of flying in space
what precision mind can trace
okay lace

do let me know
which GOD!
helped them
in this race

If silence is gold
then GOD
too has become old

move along with times
pray
scientifically
if one still may

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Esker

Esker

10 years 5 months ago

Earth should have a flag....but we have countries
instead...Maybe a corporate Logo....free samples..
it is marvelous to think of what we can do with
all the time to tinker....along with all the calamity
we do here to earth...

I must say Loved that you take on the issue
with gusto though!

Never obscure even in your obscurites...

Thank You!

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 5 months ago

A fun write, no need to bring God into it, as the little miracle that settled on the comet so God , both are man made to keep us all in line as my acrostic will say:-
Great
Overall
Decision
What with computers now and the ability of man that uses them we will soon be out there looking back thinking why did we wander so..
Yours, Ian