Through any
lifeline it
doesn’t matter
how long .
We must thrive
and stand strong
as time pulls
us along .
so
we stand up
and strive
by being
alive.
Oct 28, 2021
Through a lifeline
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I'm thinking...
that this one needs a little bit more focus. It seems strained. ~ Geezer.
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thank you
yes i thought so to
it’s hard for me to focus i easily get distracted like when im writing i hear a sound that breaks my concentration and when i back to writing the thought of the poem has completely retreated out of my brain. and i have to start over again