Green trees
black industry
morning mist
dank odours
clank of locomotive
painted metal surfaces
gloom
in dawns sweet
sour dance
flung seagulls
weeds in a heap
lawns bristling with daisies
weeping willows
grey against the floating dead brown leaves
deep sleep
breathes clouds
two socks on a chair
a comb on the floor
some red hair
in its teeth
twang of cycle spokes
wheels of day
sounds travelling
far into space
** ** **
Fist of petals
caged dawn
flutters soft
the horizon
black lines
orange wash
stockinged feet
slippered mud
fish scales
cobble stones
screech of gulls
hammered boats
stench of seaweed
slap of wave
shining shells
summer holiday.
Village crows cackle
down the street
milk bottles rattle
glassy windows
silently glow
fish rings
mirror faces
pots and pans
dresses
aprons
washing up water
floating leaves
gurgle of drains
rattled buckets
cocks crowing
children playing
the cat smiles to itself
the old man
knocks out his pipe
the pigeon coos.
Comments
Ann
The description of each segment was excellent, the only thing I found was that I enjoyed the descriptions but the flow needed a character or something to hold the whole thing into a story.
I will wait for your reply to see what I read wrong,
Yours as always Ian.T