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THINGS YOU SAY
Oh , I knew you wouldn’t go without a whisper,
And I knew you wouldn’t go without a scene-
A love that was burning out, not turning crisper:
A love that might as well have never been…
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Oh, you bore me to the seams
With your sorrows and your dreams,
And the tales of things you gave up just for me-
You tell me when I came,
That I was bound in mental chains,
But you never really tried to set me free!
And I'm going…
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You say it hurts so much
For you to speak about your past,
And then you tell me of the many things you've lost-
You tell me when I came
That I was blind and I was lame,
But you give me sight and freedom at what cost!
And I'm gone…
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If you'd like to hear the sung version, please click on the link below:
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Comments
Do you really want the raw truth about this poem?
Do you really want the raw truth about this poem?
Ok here you are: I love it.:)))
The flow of words amazing and deep
Mona
Thank you, glad you enjoyed this one.
Psyve
Adding this to my favourites.
Adding this to my favourites. The list grows longer....
~A
Anna,
Thank you for reading / listening to this one and commenting.
Am flattered you are adding this to your favourites list. :-)
Psyve
things
break ups are caused by many reasons and seldom go smoothly. Very enjoyable...................scribbler
Scribbler,
Thank you for stopping by to comment.
Pleased you found this an enjoyable read.
Psyve
Seren
Thank you for listening and reading. Pleased you enjoyed this one.
Psyve
Shirley,
Am glad you enjoyed this song.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Psyve
hi
a sad comment on the state of a relationship. good job.
lou
Lou,
Thnks for stopping by and commenting.
Psyve
Hi Psyve
I love the raw emotion you put into your poetry. I could imagine this piece being acted out on the stage! and the tense atmosphere would have the audience rivited.
You held my attention in a dynamic way.
Well done
Love Mand xxxxxxx