the temple

Dressed as freely as I came
Adorned with nothing,the mirror reflecting beauty and strength
I take a moment to gaze

A sacred temple is what I'm described as
A little bit of honey, chocolate, milk, scars and lightning
Treating me otherwise is pure ignorance
So with trembling knees and bowed head, you will worship in spirit and in truth...

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Style/Type: Free verse

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Region, Country: nigeria, NGA

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the temple

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