teenager single mom

i suggest you break it into even further stanzas, i suggest as below
and i also suggest that you move the lines i have written in capitals. i just think they belong more where i have put them
- as you know though - this is just my opinion

i think this is a really good write

teenager single mom
How is the kid?
love him
but we can't reconcile
where the manliness of man has gone
and
left her warmed up oven forlorn

MANY WOMEN HANKER
IN THE TWILIGHT FOR THEY DESIRE
TO SEE THE SUNRISE EFFECT
FROM LAST NIGHT'S SOJOURN
the morn of a dying kind surfaces
when most go in for IVF,

at least small mercies
God's gift
at times prove best
see the sun as a rising one,
its setting too somewhere 'tis true
but a positivity
I wish to imbue in you.

You are the dawn of a new era,
a new wave,
be brave
not to a guy's machinations be a slave

you are that sun
a blessed mom
you may be one.

there are some really good teenage mums out there
- seems that is all they want - to have a baby, often don't care if the father sticks around or not
perhaps it says something about society that these kids have babies so they have someone to love who will love them back unconditionally

of course, that is only one part of it ...
love judy
xxxx

A reflection from without or within a very good write,

let the memory concede, that the quill will run its course,

giving your thoughts to others,

that they will remember who you really are...

Young Bard, I will say no more, Yours Ian.T