They stare at him as he stands there
and try absorbing what he might say.
Their questions range 'most everywhere.
so HE becomes the one who learns today.
Jul 28, 2017
TEACHER/STUDENT
About This Poem
Last Few Words: "Let he would learn, teach"
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Really liked how you seemed to say so much with so few words.
read it a few times and that's what stuck out to me. I've no critique to offer as there's a real self-affirming quality to the poem, if that makes any sense at all. I think that only adds to the strength of the piece. A refreshing read, thanks,
Nicholas.
Hello!
Thank you. I try to write something short once in a while because I know some of my stuff if pretty long. Appreciate your dropping by........stan