father....
although he was seriously ill
the surgeon declined
to operate
but he adamantly insisted
I'm paying, he snarled...
who knows
when the dangling hour...
will come
post operation
he lay horizontal
while the world rotated him a time
around the sun
then
sooner than expected
standing
… walking...
the young surgeon died
patient survived…
for over two decades
thereafter...
one’s mind has power
foreign to what is rational
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hi loved
here;'s my edit you requested xxx
sorry to have been so long
although he was seriously ill
the surgeon declined
to operate
but he adamantly insisted
I'm paying, he snarled...
who knows
when the dangling hour...
will come
post operation
he lay horizontal
while the world rotated him a time
around the sun
then
sooner than expected
standing
… walking...
the young surgeon died
patient survived…
for over two decades
thereafter...
one’s mind has power
foreign to what is rational
love judy
xxx
You are,
Judy
m a r v e l l o u s
thanks you have turned the poem around