lovedly
lovedly
Jul 21, 2014

sun is my god and our god

sun is my god and our god

can you imagine
anything born without the sun

nothing

so god is manifest
in SUN only
that only time can tell
but when I discourse with normal
intelligent humans
I don't discuss religion

' tis ones faith and belief
let them in themselves
find a relief

who am I to over shadow the heavens
and imagine a sky without a sun

then there will be
NO
HUMANS ...
ANIMALS
AND
PLANTS

NONE

EARTH WILL BE BARREN

no one will think of
GLOBAL WARMING
THERE WON'T BE THE NEED
none...

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Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 9 months ago

A good view of things, yet think young Bard if we were pure energy we would not need the sun, and at the same time we could become part of a sun not yet seen here or ever will be.
Energy will flow as an eternal wave just don't miss the sojourn,
Take care thinking of you, Yours Ian.T

lovedly

when our bodies are burnt
some elements remain
isn't it?
So we are composition of minerals and to keep active
we invent innovate and bring about discussions....
yet I don't want any one to take my view
be what you wil
the sojourn will be on

but only as long as we have a sun
AND Human beings a son .
Hahahahaaa
to continue transmission of X and Y chromosomes
to support the selfish gene

Ian.T

Well I wonder what happens when our lovely sun becomes an all consuming red giant, it aren't green and we aren't no sweet corn.
We shall return to being a free energy pattern unique as we have always been, alongside all the other unique patterns that belong to the whole.
Then in the distance those patterns may join again, to allow us to be humons or some such container, lol.
Take care that you retain your pattern young Bard,
Yours Ian.T