Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Feb 14, 2023

Strays

She says, “I love you Button.”
I say, “You’re like the end of a good day.”

She smiles playfully when I say this
and asks, “The agreeable parts,
or something else?”
“No silly, the good things.”, I reply

“It’s your heartbreak for the dog
that appeared to be a stray,
and the relief you felt
when the owner finally came along
that makes it that way.”

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Happy Valentine's day Neopoet family!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

Lavender

Hello, Michael,
I can imagine you had a wonderful Valentine's Day! Appreciating one another, especially in these minute, tender moments, is such a gift. You capture both sides of this exchange so well, along with its warm, deep meaning.
Thank you!
L