In search of you
a friend who once spoke
high of a golden world of poetry
and at the helm was I
where in the wilderness
have you amalgamated into thin air,
vanished!
why have you my friend from a poet's life banished,
where amongst the myriads of stars
shall I now find another friend?
my well wisher of your kind
return to me the smiles I gave
so that poetry flowed from my pathway
to lead a soul to greater glory,
come now, make life no more gory,
'tis a life time's venture I compose
and to the cauldrons of time
my mind’s creations I dispose..
Comments
Who is not your friend
Any longer on neopoets ?
you are good
you do humour------
ask some who addressme as
assssssssssss....
with a caps
Another commentary poem I can
Another commentary poem I can't see anything to fault
I'm sure your friend will return we all come and go as
Life permits
Heres hoping you see your friend sooner rather than later
Love Jc :)
SO THOUGHTFUL and kind
glad you are back in form
Loved
We all have many things to do and your friends are still here, they read each day and sometimes your man made time runs out on them.
As you can see by my 00-00 Blog I am up late each night, that I don't comment doesn't mean that I haven't read your poetry, it is just having more hours would be a good thing lol.
Take care young Bard and keep writing, Yours as always Ian.T
you lighten
my heart
how glad I am to know
you do....