The perfect place for me to start
To splash, to kick, to learn
Oh I'm so glad, much fun we had
The journey has just begun
Dipping in the pool was stimulating
Although unsure of getting wet
However, an exhilarating experience
One, I won’t easily forget.
Those helpful hints, without reserve,
Our stanzas improved flow,
Though Eddie wants no special praise
Stand up and take a bow !!
Worked as a group
Each helping the other,
one cohesive mind.
Equality ruled.
It seems the sum of all our work
exceeded all the parts
result from refusing to shirk
by both the young and the old farts
a true community of poets, young and older
came together to refine each other
team effort, equality, and experiences
made the Splash Pool workshop excel
A union of minds
Thoughts sparkling
Like the sun on a splash pool
Creating unforgettable rhymes
Stanza Order and Author
Samaira
xena465
Tam the Chanter
lou
scribbler
Barbara Writes
Eduardo Cruz
Comments
To all
I bow to you for the hard work you put in.
My only hope is that you all go and join "Olympic Pool"
To my Moderators, only with your help was this all possible.
Stan, lou, and Barbara
with much appreciation!
Eddie
there is a certain pool
circling and salivating
where no-one's a fool
only cultivating
a taste for fresh meat!
[technical point, do sharks salivate?]
who knows, their in water how
who knows, their in water how would you tell. I think you meant it as a metaphor.
(while the shark chumped on his leg, holy shit look it's salivating. talk about pleasure)
LMFAO
stop making me laugh will you.
Eddie
To paraphrase Roy Scheider in "Jaws"
"We're going to need a bigger site"
[grins]
Jess
Or learn to swim, with the sharks.
Eddie