William Saint George
William Saint George
Nov 08, 2013

Sparrows

Why do the sparrows fly so high,
so near the sun,
so out of reach of limb
and rifle shot?

Why do they call,
but more,
why do I hear them call
when I cannot share
their merry song?

Why do they come
and go
like fleeting ghosts;
like happy little phantoms
dancing to a tune
that only God
and angels know?

That I do not know?

Why can no shaft
dethrone them from
their airy seat
into my empty arms?

When shall I be unbound
from this dreary rock,
to taste the fruitful air
on my dry tongue,
to beat my wings once more
against the wind

and dance the dance of sparrows?

audio: http://vocaroo.com/i/s0sCFwKlQjxi

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ghana, GHA

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare

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Comments

Seren

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

I really enjoyed this poem there is so much to like, Have you heard the story of the Sparrows Song ? it really is quite beautiful this reminded me of that, I cant see anything major that needs changing a really solid piece that brought with it an air of mystery, well done.

regards Jayne-Chloe