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Jul 08, 2011

Some Summer Haiku

Mid day heat shimmers
Over a close cut hay field
In heart of summer

Beneath a large oak
Biting breaths of soggy air
July in the south

Dew spangled dawn
Disappears after sunrise
Becomes humid air

Bird pants on deck rail
In the late afternoon heat
craving cooler days

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Comments

S

thanks for visiting. Been so busy I've had little time to comment on friends' poems lately, but I Have been reading them. Reckon I've too many irons in the fire.......................stan

loved

hot irons with frnds
i liked ur whisky comment on my reactions
and letter written on Ians behest
thanx

S

Not exactly my forte either but I like to give them a run every once in a while...............stan