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Jun 29, 2013

some distant drums did beat

distant drums did beat
that lonely night
when I was all alone
sleeping in the veiled forest
life seemed to drudge along
there was none to hear my song
in the far distant time at night
I heard drums on my transistor
some folks were like me
in a far off jungle merrying
they must have been lonely too
but they were enjoying
as much as I wished to

I threw off the blanket
went into the open stark naked
none could have seen me
as I danced with abandoned glory
when I reentered my tent
torches flashed at me
guys were watching unabashedly
now they clapped for me..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

You is a big exhibitionist, some with the torches you may have put to shame the others would just smile LOL.
For some reason I liked this write from one of your comments again, and can't recall where, I shall stream some more in a few days or so am having a break am a little tired.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

Seren

Seren

11 years 10 months ago

Like Ian I liked this write I am gathering its from one of your comments but it just has a different feel to your normal

nicely done

love JC x