lou
lou
Oct 16, 2011

Soldier of freedom

Unsolicited garbage spilled 
Upon the battle field
Weapons formulated to destroy
Obliterate all meaning 

Swagger and bluff 
you entered the arena
ready for war
Arrogance unyielding

Opposition shielded  
In the trenches shooting back 
Snipers ready to attack
Soldiers of freedom 

Battle commences individualism 
Is our weapon 
Nonconformity our armour 
Liberty our choice

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Excuse lack of punctuation and poor lay out for now please , I will come back to that Lol!! Thank you

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

No need for excuses it's great, and the last verse nails it. Terrific write . Regards Roscoe...

lou

lou

13 years 6 months ago

Thank you very much

Lou

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

13 years 6 months ago

Lou,

dreadful use of punctuation and layout is pants!

LOL!

HS

lou

lou

13 years 6 months ago

In reply to by Hooded Stranger

Cheeky Bugger !!!

LMAO!!

Lou

M

Spot On

Warrior Lou!!

Great writing here I like it

Mona
xox