The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
Casts its ceaseless grasp
On the shining beach
above the cowering tide
Time languors
At the foot of cobwebs
Between the glowing grass
Feb 27, 2013
Sky/ Ground
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Comments
been out west....
idaho and then east to Kentucky
america is one big assed country
beautiful.............
I was almost an american
my dad was an american
saw much
died young
I like this poem very much
words shunted in like a mixed freight
listening to House of the rising sun
by the Animals
reading these words...
fitting to the music
Thank You!
What were you describing
Which .book at bedtime will this be in, a short but good read
Hi
Hi
not much to be said except I really love this one my favourite lines
The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
sigh a lovely read I thoroughly enjoyed
love JC x