While folding the pages
of the life's book
page after page
in search of happiness
between the lines,
a period or a comma
might hinder the journey,
don't stop though,
the book's still open
your epitaph isn't written yet.
Apr 22, 2018
A Simple Read
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Clichéd?
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Hi Rula
A simple philosophy very aptly expressed / explained by you in this crisp gem of a poem .....a great reflection...
warmly...
Wow raj
that was so quick. So happy to know it appeals to you dear friend.
Really appreciate it.
Thank you!
Not me Rula...i need to thank
Not me Rula...i need to thank you for giving me the pleasure of a read...I believe this has a potential of converting into Sunku form because with such simplicity and in few words your message in the poem hits home....
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I'd very much
wish to have your sunku virsion and share it here with me dear raj.