High winds in spring, flip the skirt tail of his girl, unaware.
Her dress tail is like a parachute; modesty is lost;
he quickly covers her and protects his girl's dignity.
Apr 19, 2014
Sijo Skirt tail in the wind
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Sijo is a new form of poetry writing I found fun to write. If you want to learn more about its form PM me and Ill share what I know. Or you can research like I did.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara
What a lovely fresh write, and the finding of Sijo, I shall have to add it to my Poetry types.
Loved it,
Yours Ian.T
Ian
Glad you loved it. I like learning writing different forms of poetry. Glad to share with Neopoets.