Should you forget me REFORCED EDIT

Should you forget me

Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
In search of a fresher one
than me
never mind just forget me

I shall chase another speedier wind would you care to join in the flood too
never mind we shall sing the chorus too
I and you
sorry
you and I

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Should you forget me

Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

I'd like to see..

..another stanza ending with

"Where you are"

The wind is one of a true poet's muses. It is also my favourite way to travel.

Thomas

cdn poet friend

just add on i will include not much of a musician i am

Okay

I apologize.

Thomas

Thomas who

see edit as requested

ok

tomorrow I will

today's one free poem

is over

ASK GEE
Why is jess controlling us still

This is enjambment

The poem has no interruptions of any punctuation mark. As I read aloud the tone in the poem drops unfinished lines. In the poem there is rhetorical question aboud. In many cases it may be intended to start a discourse, or as a means of displaying or emphasize the speaker's opinion on topic.