lovedly
lovedly
Aug 25, 2020

SHARING THOUGHTS

Big folks say
then go away
them some remember
till many a days

guys like me are washed away
in the river's tide or gusty wind

we all are reminded of penance
we ought to do

yet life goes on
with or without remorse
grief of course

so I composed my poem
in Grief be Brief
easier said than done

I cannot deliver sermon
to any one

May your wisdom prevail
you all have experience
I am a simplistic poet
only sharing my views with many
so keep at it
as it gives solace to thee
forgive and forget me

I compose only
free style poetry

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

C

I liked your second verse guys like me etc etc can be used for gals as well and you cannot prech to those that wi9ll not hear

Geezer

Big folks say lots of stuff; but we have to learn it all for ourselves. As we grow elder and seek peace, we suddenly understand
that nobody is an island and the truth is that we are all alike in some way or another. We love to say that we are different. but isn't that the same as everyone else? Everyone has their place in this universe. Insignifcant poet? I don't believe there is such a thing. Certainly not you. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

both are an entity
humans
hence similarity t
hanks for your solidarity
gee and lovedly
all must read
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