Sex what’s love got to do with it

When my girl wants it bad
I think to myself sex
How long can I last?
Only to satisfy her is all that I ask
I am older now and my youth has passed
So what love got to do with it
Is the little blue pill to complete the task
My opinion is
Giving her all I can
Until she done
Only to satisfy her
Is my only plan

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Detroit Mi

Favorite Poets: my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music

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Comments

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Sounds like you need to use the internet for different things other than poems

Yeah...

this feels raw, like the man in the poem; he feels how youthful her love makes him.
Remembering the early years of their relationship
when their passion was enough to...
without pills.

I'm thinking primal instinct
Survival
procreation...

~Geezer.
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Until she done

perhaps you meant
Until she's done

with stamina then
now bluish ones synchronization
between ejack and orgasm ..rarely possible
lol
good fun at any age ....when it's still done ---- time's just a limitation

now stand fast poet many at our age
are half mast!