Self Perception

Lonely
I can't be without a crowd
Alone
I can even be a cloud

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Very Good Work Loving This

Well, you have most assuredly gotten a few interesting points across. I can see where you are very analytical in your approach and that is something I rarely come across and welcome. Your work, from what I have read, is a mixture of intellectual, abstract and sometimes whimsical tenant. This too, is rare, in my estimation and a different avenue of attack. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Thanks Mario

for reading and your comment..
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some thing is great about this

crowd on earth
cloud in heavens

Thanks Lovedly

for reading

crowd here is in the context that one feels lonely if going unnoticed in a crowd

even be a cloud is in the context that being alone one is free to fantasize or also as feel on top of the world
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