Seeding of a Thought

In mind seeds a thought
dwelling in the sub conscious
till births a poem

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Hi Raj

Nice senryu! Syllable count looks good to me. I like the idea that a seed of thought dwelling in the sub conscious is poised ready to give birth to a poem! Very imaginative!

Love to you!

Mand xxxx

Hi Mand

Good to see you after a while. Thanks for dropping by and your comment. Good to know you liked the thought.

Much love n hugs...

hi Raj

as Mand says (hi Mand xxx) nice senryu
i like the s alliteration (although i've been led to believe that alliteration has no place in japanese poetry - too bad if that's the case ços i like it :)

love judy
xxx

Hi judyanne - :)

Seems we are both fans of this little gem!

Hi Judyanne

Thanks for your time and comments which are always welcome. Good to know you liked this one.

much love and hope you are taking good care of yourself...

Me too

I like this little piece dear raj.
I thought you need a space in the title between "a" and "Thought"

Thanks Rula for your

Thanks Rula for your encouraging comment.

I must say you have a hawk's vision lol.....i have made the correction in the title..

Regards,