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Jun 19, 2012

seed of life TIME Still unseeded

seed of life TIME

You do see through
metaphorically the seed of life
from within human
and
then take on another sojourn
towards a newer generation,
as the only constancy in life
is change
and
that the new seed provides
as an admixture,

West and East.

after another hundred years
there will be no
West or East

all humans will inherit the earth as meek,
poverty stricken,
nude
stark raving mad ,
raven hungry

upon the souls of politicians
will be swords
and
there will be no leader
except a universal God
and that is
TIME..

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Style/Type: Free verse

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

It is Time to give up Time it is relevant to its own creation, Yesterday, today, and tomorrow are the same, beware that Time doesn't Smote you better to go and Begat as they said, some place yesterday,
Yours Ian.T

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loved

12 years 4 months ago

did the calculators

make a correction
Mayan was lunar
now a days we all follow Gregorian
have breakfast with me
at Tifanny's
22nd Dec mourning

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 4 months ago

This piece was quite good and the theme was very good, though you nearly quoted Matthew chapter five where we inherit the Earth lol.
As to the Mayan way, I asked Cata and he said it was OK as it was a Lunar calendar. I think he has gone out there to clean it up a little as we have to start again, he was hoping not to have to do it again as it has lasted 5200 years lol.
Take care young Bard will talk later, Yours Ian.T