Spring before Summer
and Autumn before Winter
Seasonal Splendour
Feb 21, 2018
Seasonings:
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Just Rhyku
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Nice & neat
I am not an educated critic regarding poetry (other stuff, yes), especially rhyku. But I enjoyed this & it seems to be as perfect as it can be. Now you have made me keen to go & research rhyku (I understand the significance of the rhythm & line limitations, I mean I want to know more :) )