Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Oct 01, 2012

In search of love

the moon shines bright
faithfully every thirty days
as some enjoy the night

wishing upon the stars
for another chance
to change the world

the ocean water ripples
carrying with its memories
of those standing on it shores

taking hold of its power
to find love infinities
where no one knows a broken heart

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

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Comments

Rula

Rula

12 years 7 months ago

Especially liked your wishes in

wishing upon the stars
for another chance
to change the world

the ocean water ripples
carrying with it memories
of those standing on it shores ------> maybe on(( its ))shores

Thanks for sharing