Catalectic Dactyl
What is the nature of things, said the man.
Guess, for I’ll not tell a thing of the plan.
Wonder and fuss with the thoughts if you can.
I will not help you a whit with the scan.
Catalectic Dactyl
What is the nature of things, said the man.
Guess, for I’ll not tell a thing of the plan.
Wonder and fuss with the thoughts if you can.
I will not help you a whit with the scan.
Last Few Words: A thought. Anapest and Dactyl come easier if you "sing" them.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Ha
A lovely thought and a good example of dactyl I though.
Forgive me Wes, but I find catalptic dactyl a cop-out.
Will listen to contra-arguments however the use of a stressed syllable at the end of the verse (line) defeats the gentle, leading nature of Dactyl.
I agree.
Dactyl should be dactyl, but what can I say... I copped out.