As I touch the keys
let my thoughts come loose
Pictures come and go
using more damned juice
The linking that I share
with the world at large
To my credit, I must use
a phone to make a charge
Killer phones, they are
They’re holding me for ransom
They’re so sleek and fast
some are really handsome
Anticipate my needs
just scan my words before
Put their own words in
Don’t need to say it anymore
If I hesitate too long
pushing buttons, texting
I may find myself
in a conversation vexing
Give me some control
cell phone gods, I pray
Let me make one call
just one; going right today
Comments
They are taking over
Replacing our thoughts with theirs! Good write!
Thanks Carrie...
I made a few changes, trying to get the rhythm right. Hope it sounds better now.
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Definitely
Sounds better with the rhythm cleaned up. Damn phone with a mind of it own.
Gee...Interesting take on
Gee...Interesting take on smartphone.
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Hey Gee
All this tech crap is going to be the death of true conversation. I foresee great great grandchildren with atrophied tongues and over sized thumbs lol
Hey Stan
I agree with you about over sized thumbs which is in sync with Darwin's Theory of Evolution ...
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I get...
a cool visual on that one! Maybe thumbs with little points to facilitate the ever smaller buttons?
Gee.
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also
skinny necks tilted permanently down