A moment united
An awesome distinct thought,
point of view, none imagined
an idea freshly decided
initiated from creative cruxes of poetic etches
should be mounted, the next time
unveiled nuggets, shimmer in the light of your eyes
and, enhance taste, savoring the moment
Comments
Barbara! what have yiu done?
Is it the pain, the experience? Whatever, your poetry has achieved a whole new dimension,
I love it! and find it very hard to critique
Really, your poetry has changed a lot, for the better..
Thanks Jess
Your rhyming workshop along with what I learning and experiencing is really what happening. Glad you like it. It shows me I am really getting better at writing poetry. And critiquing others
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