lovedly
lovedly
Feb 10, 2017

Samson and Delila

Sweeter than honey- Stronger than a lion

My Love is
Sweeter than Honey

I am Stronger
than a Lion

I rest as she hunts for food
for me

Then every forty minutes
I REWARD her
for about two minutes

all know it.....
now you do too

VOYEURS PLEASE EXCUSE !!!!

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Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Eumolpus

I like your poem. You and your lover become the lions...I like the last line.
You might want to consider how lions mate, I've been lucky enough to see it on some trips to Africa.
Once they fall in love, they copulate every 40 minutes, an act which takes about a minute and is quite passionate. You can set your clock to it. Every 40 minutes for 2 days!
At the end the male will often have to defend himself against other suitors who have been watching, getting horny, and wanting the female for himself. All the other animals around are also watching (giraffes, zebras wildebeest etc). The lover is at a disadvantage, being quite worn out from his 48 hour Viagra trip, and they often win but sometimes the fight is deadly. It's tough to be a lion, During the process, she does the hunting and cooking, as usual.
So I would reconsider "Every 2 minutes" to "every half hour...."

lovedly

''''''Once they fall in love, they copulate every 40 minutes,
an act which takes about a minute
and
is quite passionate.
You can set your clock to it.
Every 40 minutes for 2 days!'''

The lady had mentioned every two hours
you knowledge is advanced You add tomy poetic beauty .THANKS
for your maiden visit

error of two minutes is being corrected
Thanks again