From a violent toothache,
I was holding a swollen cheek,
As I dug near the jujube tree,
Wishing to plant some seeds.
Getting my genteel fingers muddied up,
I turned over the chilly ground.
O, I do remember this much,
That cold day, that evening,
In the fresh-dug hole, there was
A worm wiggling inside.
And that moment, behind the eaves down low,
The moon came up as if to slither up
Behind a woman's ear — and that's how
It came up, the moon.
May 20, 2018
Sakiwara Hagutaro
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Japanese Symbolist--creepy, lovely
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Most gorgeous poem I read in
Most gorgeous poem I read in years.
I see the Japanese silk miniature in front of my eyes!
That's
a poem in translation. Glad you liked it, though.
Looking forward to read more
Looking forward to read more of those.