OriginalRhyku
Jul 22, 2018

Rogue State

What constitutes certified rogue nation?
When criminal leaders commit murder
Without any fear of repercussion
Tar victims as threats to social order

The judicial system will not assist
As subservient serfs dismiss what’s fact
When the victims’ kin in their claims persist
Servile stooges react as per their pact

However despite all their state power
The time of reckoning is drawing near
As victims’ kin bask in their winning hour
And the criminals face justice and fear

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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Comments

chevyvent

Very beautifully written makes you think of a sunset beach. Toward a renewal you have encountered very good meaning in piece. Let the words trickle down your mind through your thoughts. You made a decent stab at it very creative piece you got this very good. Thinking of a rainbow moment with words its a stretch of the imagination. Just some thoughts about this piece, True words true to life really beautiful in its form.

R

Sunsets and rainbows??? Mario you must be joking...there are no rainbows after sun sets..please make sure your comments are in sync with the write
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Roscoe Lane

Very good and I only wish it were to come true. Regards Roscoe.....