Rhythm of a Forgotten Drum

Gradual process is my colourful nomenclature.
My self-exhibited great subject an essential drum beat that
I want to grab.

Vitality is coming out my life
At last that shall make people to shout: wow!
For a sudden reality of my very long dreams
Many would be in doubt to agree for an outlaw for decades
To create such mastery piece and to be co-author;
Some people will not believe my little
Scratch creativity.
Knowing that I work behind the close door for years
More especially (in solitary) that I always draw my strength.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria abjua, NGA

Favorite Poets: Christopher Okigbo. Williams Shakespeare. J.P Clark. Wole Soyinka

Comments

I won't be stiff-necked not to accept my mistakes

I need to beat my self harder to observe the usual mistakes that always persist. Thanks for your intelligent observation. Hoping to come to level of maturity. Though, i'm in a learning curve.