RHYKU

The screen's fading glow
is like memories dissipating
as I rise and finally go
to my warm bed awaiting

Rhyku- a new,I think, form similar to Haiku in which brevity in form is used but in which at Least 2 lines contain rhyme.Does not matter which 2. Limitation in number of lines is 3 minimum and 4 maximum and length of each line to not exceed 7 words. Give it a try and see if you like it lol...............stan

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Comments

Stan

I think that is a atmospheric piece, I like it a lot.

Love Lou

hello lou

I am pleased you enjoyed it..............stan

i like this stan

i relly like ti hard to write stan but wanted to tell you this liitle bit is a big warm thought and feel in your write here. talk soon or writ bettre when ican get felling back in lefthand,,love to you and sue xoxo

Hi mona

Thank you and hope you get better soon............stan

hello

I usually don't hang around, I hit "off" and leave lol. Thanks for stopping by........stan

Thanks

(I think) now people will know one person to blame for the ever expanding types of poetry lol.............stan

hello

WEll, actually I DID just make up this form and rules lol. It is kind of a Haiku for rhymers and those who don't count syllables. Still has rules, just different rules. Bet you could write a better one...........stan

Stan,

Stan,
My goodness, I just realised I was writing Rhyku over three decades before you just invented it!
Here's one I wrote for a dimunitive young lady a long time ago. Lol!

SHORT AND...

Two eyes, two lips
Two hands two feet,
Very short
And very sweet.

Cheers,
Psyve

hello

Nothing really new under the sun, huh? lol........................stan