lou
lou
May 29, 2011

Resurrection

Inert in stasis,
Comatose, catatonic.
Barely breathing.

Resurrection, adrenaline pumping,
Surging assaulting my senses.
jolting, into overdrive.

Hunger, a craving
Consuming my soul,
Devouring my self control.

Bodies moist gleaming
in post coital congress,
uncoil our union.

Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.   
 

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Eduardo Cruz

Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.

what an incredible stanza.
It explodes on to the page.

great work lou
I love it just the way it's written.
perfectly carrying the emotions right to the bang!

Eddie

lou

lou

13 years 11 months ago

Thank you very much.

Lou