Apr 15, 2013
in for repairs
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hi Bonnie,
in for repairs? I thought it to be a great title ... ain't we all in need for
some repairs.
Boni
You will have lots more comments after your repairs are completed.
What does a broken poet look like, better not say lol,
Will send you a thought checker it repairs broken thoughts, by getting rid of distractions.. I just go sit in my Cave lol,
Have a lovely mend,
Yours Ian.T