docmaverick
docmaverick
Jan 18, 2011

Remembering Lifes' Seasons

The summer can bring back a memory

that our winters' antics made,

an ice-cream can cause a "brain-freeze"

even though we were searching for shade.

Life's seasons seem to cycle, that way

and each recollection can bring,

a bushel of bitter/sweet memories

that can cause our hearts to up, and sing!

It's funny how we can come across, sometimes

as not being easy to satisfy,

for, sometimes during a happy occasion

we might recall something that makes us cry.

I'm pleased that I'm even capable

of remembering various past events,

because, anytime is actually a good time

to maybe smile, at our previous laments!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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Comments

docmaverick

....you have given me a revue that has quite simply, "made my whole day"! And so, I must thank you. I've been stuck in this "zone", of late. I promise to shake it off, very soon...okay?
Thank-you, somehow I knew you'd understand.
I'm happy you enjoyed this one.
take care of you, & yours;
doc.

docmaverick

...good to hear from you! And, I certainly thank you for your generous revue, your words are greatly cherished, because I feel I'm aware of your integrety in your understanding of the craft....so, I really feel honored.
Enjoy all of your seasons, for all the right reasons!
Take care, friend...
doc.