Moon.
My silent witness.
Reflection of creation.
Where karma sits in residence.
Let go.
Feb 09, 2022
Reformation
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I'm back from hibernation -- hope you're all doing well. Time to reconnect...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Hi Owl
Nice to see you back.
Thomas
Made me stretch
I was wondering if the shortness of this piece could be expanded some. by stretching, I mean that I had to reach for the obscure connotations of some of the words you chose.
Dictionary definition of Reformation: the act of reforming; state of being reformed.
I really like the context of reformation. I just feel that your poems to be expanded.