lovedly
lovedly
Jan 29, 2015

of reality Kind edit

'''was'''... means gone----

''let old bitters be washed away----- and honey across memory ....do spray

Pragmatic ::::::no Posthumously

Very pragmatic view
that's why
Nobel is given to those living
and
those since had gone....
need no Posthumous
they need only to be remembered
even that they will know not

brains have been left in ashes
of that is there still
in any minds
a lingering doubt?

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Style/Type: Free verse

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

judyanne

I never knew that
But I checked, and I see that it is true

Good subject, loved - but you need to loose some waffle

love judy
xxx

Sparrow

One of your complex riddles again, always remember that "Now" is but a thought before "Was"
I wonder if there is a barrier there like the sound barrier, and that it is our awareness that keeps us locked in the "Now.
Good write I wont bother about the Nobel it is a fictitious thing to many of us, lol
Yours Ian..