PYRAMIDS AND OTHER THINGS
Time strikes down empires
buried in shifting sands
princes, kings, jeweled crowns,
papal rings and wedding bands
lost in years of changing winds.
no seed of Creation withstands
Time’s blind fury.
May 16, 2016
PYRAMIDS AND OTHER THINGS
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Awesome Joe
The last line speaks volumes!
I like the title very much.
thank you, Ruls. It is
thank you, Ruls. It is getting so hard to write anything worthwhile,
joe
I very much enjoyed this. It
I very much enjoyed this. It made me think 'I wish I'd written that'
Jx
Thanx, Jane, It IS different
Thanx, Jane, It IS different from my usual stuff.
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joe
Interesting
rhyme scheme. A powerful poem about powers. First and last lines are quite a pair.
you explained it well
you explained it well
joe
you explained it well,Keith
great write Joe
Good word usage, and I really like the rhyme scheme
Nothing withstands the sands of time
love judy
xxx
thnx dear friend
thnx dear friend
wow... nothing less ...nor short of
a WOW
and that too
in CAPS
Joe
I admire you!
BIG SMILE...thanks my friend
BIG SMILE...thanks my friend
joe
R. is away. I am on my own for a while.
when you smile
I laugh
and
when you laugh
I roar
and seek others to remain silent
so that I may hear
the NIAGARA Falls!
hahaaaa....
Joe smile you will be well
and far better after all
remove the negativity in you
and see fruition of a warmer climatisation
Joe the world needs you
we are just like morning's dew.