Like a delicate flower
YES,
I endured through
Many battles of stormy weather
Day and night
rain and shine
And that I stay strong
Like a delicate flower
I STAY SURVIVED
Through many hardships
Of thirst quest and bitterness cold
I NEVER GIVE UP
Like a delicate flower, I have never
resign my beauty title
I still stand tall
to carry on my petals with
grace and poise
Like a delicate flower, I have passed through
many capricious seasons to come
with the various change in life
Yet, I still hold myself up high
Like a delicate flower, I was TOLD
As a fragile and vulnerable image portray
That I could NOT overcome my way
Above of all I have surpassed through many
Obstacles as it comes
That instilled determination
To conquer of all
To grow into
A beautiful and enchanting display
Jan 06, 2023
PUSH ME
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I joined this community writing group to enhance my writing skills and noticed that there are many great levels of writers among peers and others which inspired me to carry on my interest in writing. Writing is an ongoing learning process there is ALWAYS room for improvement where one may find is it a final piece while a suggestion can be made to help with the polish. Constructive feedback is always helpful and encouraged but in a respectful and considerate mannerism as to how we wanted our piece and message conveyed in a similar set of tone.
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Delicate but tenacious
Flowers grow out of the cracks in concrete and lotuses do not let the muck they’re rooted in effect their blooming.
Excellent summation
“Above of all I have surpassed through many
Obstacles as it comes
That instilled determination
To conquer of all
To grow into
A beautiful and enchanting display”
Great lines
Tim
Thank you for the compliment
Hi, thank you for the compliment.